Narrative Writing :)

  Narrative Writing

Once upon a time there was a baby honey bear. Her name was Lily. Lily´s fur was a colour of light honey so she wasn't really normal. Lily had a traumatising life. Everyone stood away from her and nobody liked her at all, AT ALL! Lily was homeless and no one ever met her or donated to her so Lily was very sad. A year passed and Lily was struggling to get food and water. She was very bony and could barely move! Lily was sure it was the end. A couple minutes later a brown bear walked up to her and said ¨Hi my name is Nick. Even though I am a brown bear I want to help.¨ Lily was petrified. A brown bear, Wanting to help HER?! It was a big risk to take if she accepted it...

She accepted it so with all the strength she had left, she stood up and slowly walked behind Nick. Once they got to Nick's house, Nick fed her some food. Then Nick said ¨I have to go somewhere, stay here on the couch¨ But when Nick left the room Lily followed him. She was shocked when she heard that he was planning to make her do 5 years of work! Lily walked to the front door. She turned the gold door knob and it was locked! She heard Nick running to the room she was in so she hopped on the couch and she pretended to be very weak. Nick said ¨Did someone try to hurt you because I heard the door knob turn?¨ Lily said ¨No, no I do not know what happened but can I please go outside for some fresh air?¨ Nick said ¨Of course!¨ Lily ran outside and escaped. She was so relieved. But then Nick started chasing after her when she got out of his property. realised that she was in a dream as you woke up in her beautiful bed.