A moment in time at the swimming pool

WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person. 

I arrived at the swimming pool with my bag that had my togs inside. I sprinted into the building, with my family trailing behind me. As mum paid at the counter I waited next to her. I wailed in excitement. I went to the changing rooms and got into my togs and ran to the pools. 

I jumped in and swam all the way to the Lazy River. The Lazy River dragged me in. I quickly hopped on to a inflatable doughnut. I was so relived! In the Lazy River people were swarming to get to the middle. I was shivering with fear because it goes pretty fast. I decided to follow everyone so I would feel safe. 

After a while I used all my might to get out of the Lazy River. I swam over to the bucket  that spills water over your head. I saw the bucket. Slowly but surely it was tipping towards me. y hair was absolutely soaked once it spilt. I decided to head home. It was such a fun packed activity.