Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 23 October 2020
A moment in time at the swimming pool
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Hi Emilee i like how you used full stops and capital letters next time you can put a picture of QEII pool.
ReplyDeleteHi Emilee I like how you did big and small words for detail but you missed the letter m for my in the story:) what was your favorite bit at the swimming area? P.S mrs Rooney wanted me to pick your blog because she likes them:)
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