Because we are in Lockdown and have to do online Zoom Meetings our teacher, Miss Pownall has arranged some work we have to do at home. I choose writing and for writing we had to to a positive, thoughtful, and helpful comment. I choose to do my comment on Quinn´s Blog. He was talking about what he was doing at home. Here is my comment.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Well done Emilee. This is a fantastic comment- keep up the good work. Miss Pownall
ReplyDeleteGreat job Emilee. You followed the steps for commenting perfectly. I hope Quinn finds your feedback helpful.
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