Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 8 May 2020
The Sound Collecter
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
do a nother blog i wont to see it
ReplyDeleteHi Emilee
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem. Next time maybe you could tell us what sound the water made when it came out of the tap. Good job Emilee!
Sarah
Like a wave crashing
DeleteHi Emilee
DeleteGreat, now I can picture what sound the water would make.
Sarah