Hi its me again and i have a sister her name is Summer she loves lego and lego friends. She hates honey,hard toys, not soft fluffy toys and scary movies.She is a bit mean to me sometimes like hitting me scratching me but she is still very nice and i love her.
NUMBER ONE GOOD THING - she is nice and she does share lots of here stuff with me.
NUMBER TWO GOOD THING - On some of my birthdays she makes home made cards for me and writes sweet and kind things in the card.
NUMBER THREE GOOD THING - If i am cold sometimes she shares her blanket with me.
ONLY BAD THING SHE LOVES PINK AND I HATE PINK
OK that is not really a bad thing but its true i have had some feedback too so REMEMBER please write down some feedback because i need more ideas.
BYE and thank you for reading
Thursday, 19 March 2020
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Mum i love your feedback could you comment on all of my posts please
ReplyDeleteThose are some lovely things your sister does for you
ReplyDeleteThanks UNKNOWN hehe
ReplyDeleteUNKNOWN is my mum
ReplyDeletegreat post emliee keep it up
ReplyDeleteoh thanks Amelia you really make me HAPPY
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