Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, 26 April 2020
The Glourious Horse Going To The Beach
She ran as fast as she could all the way to the sandy beach. At the beach it was nice and windy just the way she liked it. She RAN RAN RAN all the way to the end of the beach. It was wonderful and her hair and fur was all messy and tangled. But she loved it the way it was. She had a wonderful day and went back to her home.
Hope you enjoyed the story see you guys next time BYE! :) π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ See you next time :)
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Hi Emilee
ReplyDeleteI love your story about the horse, I really like how you've used adjectives to describe what the horse looks like, I can picture it in my head....good job Emilee.
Sarah